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Aurey
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The novel is overall good, reading make you feel relax though a bit irritating. I read up to anout 35, most of the time mc/plot too naive and unrealistic, plus most of the time over-erotic, it escalate too quick. mc also such pushover and side character can't are not realistic and hardly able to do anything without mc. still, with all plot hole, unrealistic, naive, over erotic. this is one of my favorite novel. the developments is also good, the idea of many systems work together into one big system really got me. This novel is the bright one, so I understand that it's suppose to be too dark or that realistic. So, that why I will continue to read hope a bit to see its development. To author: PLEASE DO NOT LOOK OVER SMALL DETAIL, too much plot hole for this good novel😢

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DaoistMQc4Nw
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Ahh that makes sense, thanks for the reply, and if i may ask, every single organism in the novel get the system right? I mean when the fish emperor was killed, they got a spell from eating its flesh, doesnt that mean the fish have a magic spell why doesnt it use it when they are fighting, the same happened when they are fighting the crimson wolf, theyrent using any spell, is that because they arent smart enough? Or because they dont have the same system as the mc, so using spell without it is incredibly hard?

PancakesWitch:Yeah, that's also explained later, he forcefully used a water spear without the help of anything, using a lot of mana in the process, skills use the aid of the system so it doesnt cost as much mana and are usually made to be spammed, she also leveled up and gained more max mp and also her mp regenrates faster the more magic stat she has, which comes from leveling up,
PancakesWitch
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Youre at chapter 35! There are literally no plot holes in my novel, and anything that makes you feel like one is explained as the story progresses.

Aurey
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Understandable, No plot hole in your novel then

DaoistMQc4Nw
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sorry but i dont understand in the very first chapter, the MC said he used almost all of his mana to make waterr spear, and the next day he just spam it like its literally nothing , so im a bit confused, does when a skill actually registered in the system, the mana Consumption is greatly reduced ? or is there something that im missing

PancakesWitch:Youre at chapter 35! There are literally no plot holes in my novel, and anything that makes you feel like one is explained as the story progresses.
PancakesWitch
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Yeah, that's also explained later, he forcefully used a water spear without the help of anything, using a lot of mana in the process, skills use the aid of the system so it doesnt cost as much mana and are usually made to be spammed, she also leveled up and gained more max mp and also her mp regenrates faster the more magic stat she has, which comes from leveling up,

DaoistMQc4Nw:sorry but i dont understand in the very first chapter, the MC said he used almost all of his mana to make waterr spear, and the next day he just spam it like its literally nothing , so im a bit confused, does when a skill actually registered in the system, the mana Consumption is greatly reduced ? or is there something that im missing