Review Detail of nayrik_marques in Epic of Caterpillar

I love the character and world development which is coherent and is in certain aspect funny(the System Master is a huge otaku who can't looking at our world especially video games before stealing ideas from here). Everything make sense (even the fact that even if being lesbian is still supposed to be rare thanks to its own skill Mc can make everybody attracted toward herself) and things that don't make sense yet are explain in time (like the heavenly commandment which just appear out of nowhere and don't seem like a challenge before discovering the lakc of communication between the border continent and central continent and the fact that there are something like living deities) .The only drawback is the lack of trill in the fighting scene because the MC is always calm i would like to see the perspective of both fighter to see if the fight seem hopeless for a fighter but also extremely hard for the second like it was done with the champion of psychic eyes and MC .I really love to be able to see the origin story of Mc enemies because it make the wars and characters feel real because each and every character possess a reason to fight whether its a curse like the divinity of Gegorgon (both the infected by Gegorgon and the Demigod itself because it was say proven that divinity influence a God personality and Gegorgon accept is own divinity to gain power because he did live in a arch world where he can't count on anybody but himself ) or family ,friend, feeling to be accepted or power.But an extremely good almost perfect novel without flaw if you take into account that the lake of trill during battle is just the Mc perspective and that its a first person novel for the most part.