never seen such a unique novel the world of the novel grows at a good pace the worlds lore is interesting each chapter complements each other the authors implementation of the system was done very nicely BEST NOVEL SO FAR
PancakesWitch
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LIKEespeecialy the system its proven that it cannot be remove its flaws are also shown and its origin which is obvious given the System Master make it coherent to have earth references in another world even the mystical species could be somewhat attributated to the system as it can influence genetic easily
PancakesWitch:Thank you very much, I will keep improving the story in the next chapters, your review is very apreciated.