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Cool story and all. Long chapters and it’s very readable. I really like evolution novels with op mc but I had to leave once you made mc into a female and refer to him as a she. It’s just not my thing. Like what’s the point of having an ***** man reincarnate if he’s just gonna become a butterfly EMPRESS or QUEEN. Should’ve just made a women reincarnate but that’s just me. Good luck on the story
Epic of Caterpillar
PancakesWitch
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well, he(she) was a caterpillar, so the title is not wrong, and how do you want him to survive without getting stronger? a caterpillar is too weak to make a whole 20 or 30 chapters, and it is something like re:monster, not tensei ****ara slime datta ken.
David_Drake:I left after I realize this was going to be another generic monster kingdom building into becoming a genderbender god. It's like a knock off of tensei ****ara slime datta ken. Also the MC wasn't even a caterpillar for ten whole chapters so the title of this fic is misleading.
Was* Plus Re:Monster isn't that great. The way I would've wanted him to survive would be to use his system as a unique cheat in this world. No one else would have access to it and he'll easily become OP as a caterpillar. Anyone could write 20 to 30 chapters if the author did this and a few exceptional people could easily write further than that. However, being a genderbender butterfly is only one of the many problems I've saw in this fic. And besides if the author actually tried making the transition to becoming a 'normal' butterfly I would be all for it. But, he just had execute it poorly on purpose.
YuuysukeYaja:well, he(she) was a caterpillar, so the title is not wrong, and how do you want him to survive without getting stronger? a caterpillar is too weak to make a whole 20 or 30 chapters, and it is something like re:monster, not tensei ****ara slime datta ken.
David_Drake:Was* Plus Re:Monster isn't that great. The way I would've wanted him to survive would be to use his system as a unique cheat in this world. No one else would have access to it and he'll easily become OP as a caterpillar. Anyone could write 20 to 30 chapters if the author did this and a few exceptional people could easily write further than that. However, being a genderbender butterfly is only one of the many problems I've saw in this fic. And besides if the author actually tried making the transition to becoming a 'normal' butterfly I would be all for it. But, he just had execute it poorly on purpose.
oh, I forgot to mention, I'll probably write some type of novel or fanfic based on alot of these novels, when I start to make them, I will ask some suggestions or tips for the novel/fanfic, you could help me out too.
David_Drake:Was* Plus Re:Monster isn't that great. The way I would've wanted him to survive would be to use his system as a unique cheat in this world. No one else would have access to it and he'll easily become OP as a caterpillar. Anyone could write 20 to 30 chapters if the author did this and a few exceptional people could easily write further than that. However, being a genderbender butterfly is only one of the many problems I've saw in this fic. And besides if the author actually tried making the transition to becoming a 'normal' butterfly I would be all for it. But, he just had execute it poorly on purpose.
YuuysukeYaja:oh, I forgot to mention, I'll probably write some type of novel or fanfic based on alot of these novels, when I start to make them, I will ask some suggestions or tips for the novel/fanfic, you could help me out too.
Hi im late to the party, I actually dont like the idea of a system being an unique thing of the MC, I've always liked it to be abused by everyone. I'm actually regretful over not leaving her as a caterpillar for longer, but its already long in the past. I actually love Re:Monster so its heavily inspired on it with a sprinkle of Tensei Shittara Slime and the Spider Isekia. I believe that I've created something enjoyable enough and Im always happy to write my novel and keep expanding the world, its like im the biggest fan of myself hahaha. I was even thinking on making a spin off were Kireina never was allowed to evolve and was stuck as a caterpillar, changing all the events heavily.
It would be weird if she was a catterpilat forever... oh and spider isekai is kumo desu ga? Nani ka?
PancakesWitch:Hi im late to the party, I actually dont like the idea of a system being an unique thing of the MC, I've always liked it to be abused by everyone. I'm actually regretful over not leaving her as a caterpillar for longer, but its already long in the past. I actually love Re:Monster so its heavily inspired on it with a sprinkle of Tensei Shittara Slime and the Spider Isekia. I believe that I've created something enjoyable enough and Im always happy to write my novel and keep expanding the world, its like im the biggest fan of myself hahaha. I was even thinking on making a spin off were Kireina never was allowed to evolve and was stuck as a caterpillar, changing all the events heavily.
YuuysukeYaja:It would be weird if she was a catterpilat forever... oh and spider isekai is kumo desu ga? Nani ka?
Noooooo!!! 😂 😂 😂 Please keep going with this story and don't change anything, I just love it like that
PancakesWitch:Yeah it would be weird but interesting haha
Body_Of_Breanna:Read the whole book before judging it. Im on chapter 108 so far it been a awesome book 📚