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Review Detail of Wallabalooza in Game of Thrones: The Golden Lion

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Wallabalooza
WallabaloozaLv34yrWallabalooza

Writer has no idea what they're doing. I'm assuming they're translating this from some other language, as English is clearly not their native tongue. It's clear they're at least trying to make something decent, but there's just too many errors; too many mistakes. Very, very basic writing. Keep working hard and I'm sure you'll get better.

Game of Thrones: The Golden Lion

Chick_Thief

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Chick_Thief
Chick_ThiefAuthorChick_Thief

Thanks

Blackpath
BlackpathLv5Blackpath

Why dont you become an editor

Jasonenrick
JasonenrickLv13Jasonenrick

I know this is 3 years too late, but your English doesn't seem that much better tbh.