The story started good with a mc that was leaning on the dark side ... but it quickly ****ed up and the mc became a tsundere hero ... Even his badass "strategist" freind became a moral compass for the mc to do good ...
Arba
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LIKEwhen you will fix it, because if not then reader will assume you not bother to learn and keep repeat the mistake there, and lot of new reader will drop it there
Arba:Thank you so much! I didn't even notice that I was doing it wrong. You're reminder woke me up. ^_^