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Overall a rather good read. I liked the idea that one bad day could spoil everything. And of course the idea that one impulsive blind action would push and push and cause dominoes to fall. In the end this story is just that, a what if the villain won. As this story shows even with the best intentions sometimes our own actions will result in not simply our own undoing, but the undoing of others. Considering the ending I would say this is very true. My only negative is the personification used changed mid story. It could have been meshed better there. Overall good story if somewhat sad.