Review Detail of DripSoup in Is that a Wisp?

When I first saw this novel I could not get past the first couple chapters, and I dropped it. I was not until a year later that I checked out the novel again and was surprised at how the author cleaned up a lot of the grammar. The story got much better and before I know it I was 100 chapters in. Give the novel a try, it really picks up around chapter 20.