IT is a very interesting start, The way the main character first gets his game system is interesting and I'm happy for once, that the girl isn't a complete scumbag like in most stories. The grammar is strange in places, but you can tell this is from someone who's English is their second language and it's great and still readable and enjoyable.
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LIKEactually she is a complete scumbag she's only interested in him because he's now power and has magical talent plus she can't over power him ,heres the thing she the same way with all other males the difference is they have magic talent but that didn't stop her from insulting and physically assaulting them
Maddox9:actually she is a complete scumbag she's only interested in him because he's now power and has magical talent plus she can't over power him ,heres the thing she the same way with all other males the difference is they have magic talent but that didn't stop her from insulting and physically assaulting them
Maddox9:She was a scumbag before the reincarnation and was still a scumbag after reincarnation she only changed her attitude when she discovered he has magic he's stronger than her and she can't beat him
I wasn't referring to his ex girlfriend (did you actually read my comments) the guy was setup and called a rapist had his magic talent taken away and had to endure been bullied and hated for something that has nothing to do with him, he even volunteered for the hunt knowing fully well he might not make it back alive he then died trying to safe the life of his former fiance who also tried to kill him indirectly. When he died our so glorious mc took over his body and received his memories and said fiance once again tried to kill him indirectly also that girl also tried to kill him directly he only survived because of the system. The abuse and bullying continued up until he became to showcase his talents then she suddenly forgot all that has been said about him. Or am I wrong????? On another note if you disagree or feel a person made a mistake feel free to correct or notify them politely it's just a story it's not necessary to insult or abuse the other person..
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When I said before the reincarnation I was referring to the original Owner of the body - after reincarnation I was referring to the mc, kindly tone down your words.. It doesn't cost anything to be polite
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The_Starters:will the Mc falls in love with a girl in this world??