So reading through the story, I really liked the modern world setting and the character descriptions. However, I would recommend the author to use grammar editor softwares to edit out any casual errors. Also, as a heads up, I would advise the author to plan out each chapter as it maintains a flow in the story. Rest all is good and this story is good for people looking for a positive setting.
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