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Review Detail of Zeph in Pocket Hunting Dimension

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Zeph
ZephLv133yrZeph

I've read the entire web novel. It begins with an interesting concept of being able to enter a separate space at night where time stops and the MC can kill various beasts to gain balls of energy that can be used to improve his talent, perception, and cultivation. There are a few other things he can get from killing the monsters, but I won't spoil that. I can say, however, that this cheat is incredibly overpowered, especially later on, and it basically voids the need for any outside help. Where this web novel falls short is on multiple fronts, including story development, character design, the world background, and probably the most devastating - the incredibly rushed ending. I mean incredibly rushed as in crossing three (yes, 3) great realms in the last 30 chapters of the novel alone, combined with several loose ends that never get mentioned. In my opinion, the author focused too heavily on the lower realms (where nothing much really happened anyway, even though he wrote a lot of words) and neglected the latter 300 chapters or so. Similarly, I could tell that the author tried to keep side characters around for a long time, but they all ended up useless and were soon discarded in the end anyway. The female leads were interesting in the beginning when mentioned, but soon became "follow the leader" type characters and their fights are basically not even mentioned after a certain point, they just tag along and watch the MC do pretty much everything. The world was also never really developed beyond the Human Race - everything afterward was a quick blur. **Spoiler** To talk more about the ending, the 7 Great Emperors (the supposed overlords of the universe) weren't really talked about much and were kind of just thrown into the story in the last 30 chapters or so. Mostly that they've been preventing and killing anyone daring to try to enter their cultivation realm due to the universe not being stable enough to contain them all (or so they say). There was also a weird addition of their universe being a small container of some sort and chaos energy from the outside has almost succeeded in breaking through and eradicating all life. It *could* have been a cool avenue to explore, but it was never explored. The hunting space is never really explained either, just that it had energy outside the realm of the universe and it was very "special". There are quite a few specific instances that I absolutely hate in this web novel, but I would have to spoil too much to write it. I feel very dissatisfied with the story and stuck with it for so long mostly because of boredom. I don't really recommend this novel for the aforementioned reasons, as well as the mind-numbing repetitiveness of the hunting dimension. It's just not worth it.

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Ice_Sovereign
Ice_SovereignLv12Ice_Sovereign

Bro can u spoil me? I fckimg hate this novel because of the idiotic mc...... Did the mc mature?

Supreme_Leader
Supreme_LeaderLv12Supreme_Leader

thank you. you saved my time.

Chicken_gravy
Chicken_gravyLv3Chicken_gravy

nah

Ice_Sovereign:Bro can u spoil me? I fckimg hate this novel because of the idiotic mc...... Did the mc mature?