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Show, don’t tell. This kind of statement dampens the mystery surrounding their future relationship. We already knew there might be potential conflict based on previous writing, now it’s solidified.
Doesn’t seems likely seeing as he literally has to scan his surroundings to “see”.
Sounds safe and totally not endangering your prodigies… again.
Really? No one ever came up with this conclusion? Doesn’t make sense. Also, that’s all he’s giving her in terms of information? That’s like nothing.
I don’t know how many times this needs to be mentioned, these chapters feel like word padding.
Adopted?
Just dump them out if you need space later, like what?
Kai?
Does that justify killing another student?
Kira doesn't have that ability.
It’s the only spell you’ve bought, it has such a specific description, and you need the chip to tell you?
He had already started reading though?
These interactions.... are unrealistic and kind of destroy the story tbh.