Ok I thought this was good at first but then the bashing of the wizarding world is idiotic. I mean it's bad but they are not that idiotic to just **** up the whole wizarding society. Also dumbeldore being evil yeah I can understand but he is not that dumb .And from my understanding he is more manipulative for the greater good guy than a evil dumbeldore , meaning the things he would won't seem nice, in fact almost as bad as a dark lord but it's to protect the innocent and children . Look this review is me not liking this due to my preference not accepting the way it should be .but man it's a fanfic you that has your ideas and views on how you want to make . So good keep going . Maybe some other fanfics of your I might like .
Porthos10:I don't read the story but the synopsis and the author say AU so your review is trash considering this