Review Detail of Meds in Transmigration: The Cannon Fodder Beauty and Masked Beast

It was a good story actually, but not that very good. for a romance yes, it gives you happiness for the both of them, but there are some concerns I have. well the fmc have a flirty attitude, that's quite nice actually, that doesnt matter, what matters is the 'characters' that felt like they haven't even saw another person in their life that a small tease from the fmc and they begin to blush lols, another authors fault is introducing a character that felt like a filler, disregarding them later on, why introduce them at the first place? you know what I cant see another reason for the small kid to be there other than to make the male mc jealous. I also doesnt understand what the main plot of this story is about, yes they are under attack and their is scheming but is that it? will that end? how do they plan to stop the war? their is loose ends for this story but I guess we cant do anything about that the story focuses on fmc. for the author, I hope you can develop your stories more :), I love it but I need to be fair there is some things that you are lacking. lets see, on the first part before the shocking mystery reveal the comedy was great, but it looks lime after that it stops, make sure to continue it and not quiting halfway, just like what you did on characters, even if they are side characters make the readers felt as if they are alive and thinking properly, have a goal, the antagonist of this story doesnt have that. oh right unneseccary deaths lol, I can't thats a big zero for me aside from your character disregarding later on whats the difference between both of them anw. lastly chapter chopping, like at the end of this chapter where you expect something happens and then new scene, like what? **. be more creative, open minded, learn r18 stuffs I was kinda expecting some detail atleast when they know/admit their feelings for each other, that makes it more good. yeah right a tsundere character really and in the end it felt like a force that they like each other? anw. good job and good luck for your future prospectives as for the readers, decide on your own after reading my post I can atleast say that you wont regret reading this :)