Review Detail of Pimpfasho in Naruto: Dream to Immortality (COMPLETED)
Review detail
The author fails in his attempts to create a villain or evil type MC and simply creates an annoying cunt of an MC. No real edginess, no character development, and the writing quality is poor. The constant random typing of "Time Skip" instead of actually writing within the story a way to transition into time skips showcases poor writing quality. Some may like this novel, but it's not for me.
Naruto: Dream to Immortality (COMPLETED)
HolyJoker
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The MC isn't really edgy, if you want a second Sasuke, look for any other fanfic, you see that the MC doesn't really need to develop, HE HAD A PAST LIFE his character IS developed. What is the use of a past life if you are gonna change the main character so much. The MC simply changes in subtle ways, simply becoming more and MORE cautious, more planning and controlling as the story goes along.🤣
HolyJoker:The MC isn't really edgy, if you want a second Sasuke, look for any other fanfic, you see that the MC doesn't really need to develop, HE HAD A PAST LIFE his character IS developed. What is the use of a past life if you are gonna change the main character so much. The MC simply changes in subtle ways, simply becoming more and MORE cautious, more planning and controlling as the story goes along.🤣
Well, the first time he killed a person, he panicked, he never panicked after that. And after that, he got crueler and crueler as he went along. Just read above chapters where he has a mental breakdown, but he recovers again. Dud if you read like 10-20 chapters and judged the story based on that then... Also the MC IS ALREADY DEVELOPED, he is a REINCARNATED PERSON. Keep that in mind if you decide to read it again.😏😏😏
Pimpfasho:If by subtle you mean non-existent then sure whatever you say.
Also he gets better at not being tricked or read like an open book by skilled ninja. He gets better at planning and manipulating people too. In the beginning he is unsure about things and later he is more confident in his plans.
Pimpfasho:If by subtle you mean non-existent then sure whatever you say.
your mc is such a pussy beta male mc who will lick an ass or grovel at enemies feet to survive just look at chapter 5 he lick that sarutobis ass because he's afraid of them retaliating, why make him a ninja and even dream of immortality if he's a pussy trashy author
HolyJoker:The MC isn't really edgy, if you want a second Sasuke, look for any other fanfic, you see that the MC doesn't really need to develop, HE HAD A PAST LIFE his character IS developed. What is the use of a past life if you are gonna change the main character so much. The MC simply changes in subtle ways, simply becoming more and MORE cautious, more planning and controlling as the story goes along.🤣
Dude c'mon now be truthful, if you are here to spam, please stop it. As I have already said to your countless messages, he isn't dumb to retaliate against Hiruzen also he never groveled or kissed anyone's feet. If you judge a 160 chapter story by reading 5 chapters then that isn't exactly a lot of perspective to it. The MC isn't gonna start ordering and acting like a d*ck as soon as he comes out of the womb or he will obviously die. He acts nice in the beginning, because it benefits him, later on he peels off his mask and isn't afraid of anything.
asaade_ragnarokm:your mc is such a pussy beta male mc who will lick an ass or grovel at enemies feet to survive just look at chapter 5 he lick that sarutobis ass because he's afraid of them retaliating, why make him a ninja and even dream of immortality if he's a pussy trashy author