Review Detail of Chunchunmaru_sama in Naruto: Dream to Immortality (COMPLETED)

Item: Naruto: Dream to Immortality (COMPLETED)
Rating: 4.2

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Chunchunmaru_samaLv63yrChunchunmaru_sama

Good fanfic! BUT!!! I advise people not to binge read this. cause you'll accumulate stress from the spelling mistakes and long paragraphs with no period( . ) or comas( , ) And might just stop reading this. Or is it just me?

Naruto: Dream to Immortality (COMPLETED)

HolyJoker

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KouhaiiLv4Kouhaii

alright, I have a question I'm already 14 chapters in this story Is there any improvement in grammar and sentencing department ? Because I'm going to invest hours of my time to read this story, and from the initial chapters that I've read, the grammars gave me a headache.

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