Review Detail of EnderPL in Naruto: Dream to Immortality (COMPLETED)
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I tried reading it, I really did. Writing quality is good and there are mistakes but you can ignore them. Stability of updates I don’t know so I gave 5. Story had so much potential but the Mc is just justifying his mental illness and lack of emotion. He thinks he had hard life but he basically is just angry that he wasn’t born rich. He blames the whole world for it but he’s just fake, ungrateful backstabbing bastard. It’s not surprising he had bad life because karma is a *****. Now he again cheats uses people lie and kill so hopefully he will die a miserable death but unfortunately author will not allow it. Author really miserably tried to justify the Mc action like: he doesn’t care about his mother because he killed her child, or he doesn’t care about his teammates and kills them because the world is that way. Plllllleeeeaaaassseee. Such a good story but too dark for me. I hate mentally ill mcs.
Naruto: Dream to Immortality (COMPLETED)
HolyJoker
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EnderPL:Yeah if you do a less f up Mc version of the story I’m all yours.
Did we read the same story? He was never angry about his life and always knew about the lifes unfairness but he accepts it and strive for more, nothing is perfect for him as perfection is an end and he hates an end, he has an never ending greed and everything is just a stepping stone to achive it. He doesn't act bad because he enjoys it he acts that way because he can gain something from it.
Did we read the same story? He was never angry about his life and always knew about the lifes unfairness but he accepts it and strive for more, nothing is perfect for him as perfection is an end and he hates an end, he has an never ending greed and everything is just a stepping stone to achive it. He doesn't act bad because he enjoys it he acts that way because he can gain something from it.
Whitestair_Ivory:Did we read the same story? He was never angry about his life and always knew about the lifes unfairness but he accepts it and strive for more, nothing is perfect for him as perfection is an end and he hates an end, he has an never ending greed and everything is just a stepping stone to achive it. He doesn't act bad because he enjoys it he acts that way because he can gain something from it.
every one of your fan fiction is stupid sh** about crazy people without brains. go to a psychiatrist.
HolyJoker:I can respect that.... MC truly is evil. That was the 'flow' the novel was going with. 😁👍 P.S: Thx for your honest review
HolyJoker:I can respect that.... MC truly is evil. That was the 'flow' the novel was going with. 😁👍 P.S: Thx for your honest review