I am going to give it a four normally I would give a three star review but I feel a bit of pity all I ask is that u take to the time to edit your chapters so they make sense to me plz
Voldemortt
Liked it!
LIKEDetachedDreamer:laziness does not deserve pity. and this is the laziest work I've read. but good for you for being generous. can't ever fault someone for being nice.