Review Detail of MysticAmy in Army of True Salvation (English)

Shameless review of the author here! For me, I did so much work on this novel. I made this when I was 16 in our mother language so translating it to English was a lot of work. I realized that the story gave me an intense cringe moment since I was so young in making this. However, in the English version, I tried my best into changing most of the unrealistic scenes to realistic ones. Also when it comes to character development, I did my best too. For the POV which is third person, this is my first time doing so, and I hope in my next stories, I’d do well and improve. :)