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Review Detail of auroraRMC in Phoenix Phire

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stopped at chapter 249 out of 600ish. this story is pretty solid, and the writing is quite good by webnovel standards. not many grammar mistakes but some misused pronouns like every other story on here. the plot was pretty fun and exciting for a while, but at this time i’ve gotten a little tired by the relationships in this story. rn i dread having mina show up. the author has nix maintain so many vague relationships, especially with mina, and i have a feeling that he’s gonna have nix add her into the harem despite what she’s said and all her prejudices and dilly dallying and whatnot. nix is a simp for real, can’t reject anyone. a shame bc i feel like it would have been more interesting if he made his relationships more clear cut and placed more emphasis on other things.

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