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you_li_er
you_li_erLv123yryou_li_er

It was really nice ar first but then it just got somewhat mundane. Like there is story there... just no good plot develpment, i dont even know who the ML is and im pretty sure I’m a little scared to know. I love BLs but im not too sure about this one... I’d say give it a try though.

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Momocatt

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MaiJem
MaiJemLv11MaiJem

Dont believe that one its a very very very very wonderful story i love it. ^_^ ^_^ ^_^ ^_^ ♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡

Momocatt
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Thanks for the read, but there was a reason why It's in video games and not in Lgbt. When I said in the first chapter it would be a slow romance, what I meant is there will be none to the end. I write shounen-ai not yaoi~ so many rotten girls will be disappointed. You must not read far if you don't know who the ml is since he was mention in the first free 71 chapters. Also, there is tons of plot development, so I'm not understanding that criticism at all. Please explain~