Review Detail of Blackwater in The Intelligent Potter

The story is ok, but I had to try 2 times to read it and 2 times I dropt it at around chap. 60. The reason is that the story just gets to convoluted for my taste. At some point the story is far less about Harry Potter and more about all the crap in the world of Harry Potter. The addition of Greengras made it only worse, she just drops in more or less and is just another with an agenda. While wie don't have to wait long to see what it is all about it is just frustrating to have a additional character in the story that just feels hollow and lacks the depth to have any meaning. The beginning of the story was great but by the end of the 1 year it driftet of. It startet to go in the direction of a mistry novel with 10.000 plot point but without it depth. Maby a nice read for some but sadly just not my cup of tea