Review Detail of Jjsw1 in If I were a Creator

I was originally very excited for this book because the main focus is creating a world. The first couple of chapters show how the author put a lot of thought and research into his book, every thing that he created had a purpose but also it was also kinda forced. Like the mc talks about free will and crap but, the dragons are forced to mate and the gods have some unrealistic rules I guess. The only bad thing I have to say about the early chapters is that mc creates a lot of different characters that u forget who they are and what they do. Also the author like talks about them and what they do but you don’t know their personalities or anything other than what the mc specifically created them to be. I have no attachment to anyone in the first volume because it’s mostly a info dump of what in the world that he created. I stopped reading when the author added Starcraft into it. Maybe because I don’t really know anything about it; it made me very uninterested. Also it felt like the author didn’t know what to do with his original world that he created, that he kinda made a fanfic of Starcraft and put it in the middle of the book. I admit to skipping the Starcraft parts to see if the author would continue with his original world and he does, but I was still kinda confused and disinterested at that point. It also to very long for the mc to create actual people living in his world like the different mortal races. He creates the angels, demons, Gods, Titans, other beings higher then Titans(forgot what they are called), dinosaurs, dragons, animals, magical beasts, things that live on different plans that have to do with some mythology like dwarves are on some plane or planet. I really don’t know because the mc creates a lot of different things that it honestly became overwhelming like if you weren’t a serious fan of different mythologies you be confused. There are like 7 underworlds where the seven deadly sins kinda live, 3 different hells, 7 heavens for the virtues, a couple planes, some more planets, and some other things but no fantasy races, no humans that live on the original planet. Now I know the author has a plan or vision for his story which I understand and appreciate but the mc really wasn’t doing much because Gaia was do the evolution stuff so a good old time skip to where the gods matured and then they would have been assigned to their respective races. But overall it’s a pretty good book especially if u like world building cause the author does go into detail about it. If you like Starcraft, you might also enjoy this read. I might later on try reading it again but currently it’s not for me.