Review Detail of AndromedaAirlines in The Lust System

You seem completely ignorant of how to deal with social interactions. Your dialogue, your character reasoning, your responses and everything just reeks of a basement dweller too far removed from reality. Your story could benefit a lot from you being less awkward and creepy and more realistic and in control. The general writing style is *******ish to the extreme and seemingly every "clever" solution your main character comes up with is incredibly inane. I really don't know what to think of you, especially considering the fact that you seem to actually think this is a good story. Work hard on your basics—very hard—then try again, because this is extremely poor quality writing.