Review Detail of Davis111 in My female disciples are scary

This is a great story. At the time of this review the author has 'dropped' the story, which is super common for any story on this site that is decent-good. The only con is that while this story is very engaging, the MC monologues inner thoughts a lot and with how little story there is, it leaves little plot development. It doesn't detract from the story, but it does mean there is less going on and more standing in a daze thinking. I have to say that from reading, the story line flows really smoothly. The plot, which in most cultivation novels branch out everywhere seemingly without direction, has a very clear path to progression. Here is hoping that the author rekindles their spirit for writing. I see that wile you stopped posting the story a few weeks ago, you are still reading on this site as of yesterday. ;)