Review Detail of amaturewriter in The Holy Chronicles of Baator

I like your WB and WD, dxd has some amazing WB that wasnt developed and seeing as it a focus of your shit is nice. I like the new addition of factions and elements, hope more is there and explored upon. The runic shit was cool, would be cool if you show its workings, and how MC uses his meta knowledge to shit rather than just stating he did this and made that. Idk, try to explore/explain more upon on it. ex: Using magic in a nuclear fission/fusion type manner to make energy reactor . Using magic to reinforce cell by cell to get stronger body rather than just covering body with magic.[ these just ex: something better than this ]. Also, I am on the fence of your wuxia shit, cultivation type power system whilst messed up is actually much better at strength lvl as opposed to other fictional counterparts [ in theory ] but I dont care as long as neither MC or others have that wuxia mentality [ or at the very least MC ]. But I suggest you do explain your power lvl. the review by DolanTramp is valid imo. Seeing as you made your own shit, also explore and explain it. ordinary goblins are dirt shit, but urs are different, more stronger. Also neuter the magic of the devils, its OP but was ignored in the OG. Try create restrictions and limits or something [ not the MC, but the magic ] Any relationships build, dont rush, dont make MC or lovers sluts. no massive harem. its ruins bks. Also cool who the MC SI as and the timeline too. GL