Review Detail of GrumpyGuy in Age of Adventure

It's obvious the young age of the author, based on the design and decision of the characters. My advice to him is - keep you head high and continue developing in the desired field ! Writing is decent, updates are frequent and the story is nice enough if you like the start, but don't expect anything else that what you sign up for. Characters are a bit bland and one dimensional, their decision are based on the understanding of the world of a teenager and are straightforward. World is our reality put against a game-world, my problem with that is most authors writing in that genre are not fully understand both of them and their work seem very far away from the reality and cannot make you sink in it and immerse in their world. If you like gaming novels and are O.K. with the first 10-15 chapters, you will enjoy this read.