At the time of writing the review, only 4 chapters had been posted. Overall, the story has potential and will develop as new chapters are loaded. At this stage, not much can be said. Some grammar mistakes (spellings and tenses) are there which could be minimized to some extent by using a grammar checker or someone to edit. We all make mistakes. The description is vivid and realistic. The story is developing well and the future chapters will take the story forward. The novel is an enjoyable read.
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