Review Detail of LordSputnik in Exalted Warlock

Honest Review The author wasn't kidding about this being a slow build... The Good: A nice slow build gives the author plenty of time to flesh out a lot of details and focus on world-building. The characters feel very unique and the author does a great job of bringing them to life. The Bad: Walking a fine line between slow build up and boring build up. Might just be me though as I found myself losing focus on the story. Overall, the writing quality is acceptable, but the excessive use of commas and the occasional typo/grammatical mistake is very distracting. The Neutral: I personally have a hard time following this one. I do enjoy a slower story at times, but it also feels like the story was intentionally slowed down at some spots. This isn't good or bad, just what the story made me feel.