I got to chapter 34 and can say that the writing has improved, and seems like a good story so far. I am looking forward to how this book will go. Overall I feel that the world building and character development is done just right for the beginning of the book thus far. As for story development I personally like the path taken where there is a goal seen already for the plot, with an easy path to continuing further.
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