Review Detail of SpaceGod76 in Doomsday Pillars

Item: Doomsday Pillars
Rating: 3.4

Review detail

SpaceGod76Lv13yrSpaceGod76

Pretty good story and the plot is good. However the grammar is terrible. Try using something like grammerly or some other spell/grammar check. Also the dialogue can be confusing.

Doomsday Pillars

Avan

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theanimemailLv10theanimemail

Yo man what chapter did you get up to? I'm still only on like chapter 20. Did you read past that? So far the grammar has been if he'd to say the least, but my main issue is the fact that he uses present tense instead of past tense during his story.

3yr