Review Detail of Avan in Doomsday Pillars

Item: Doomsday Pillars
Rating: 5

Review detail

AvanAuthor4yrAvan

Because i am the author so i will give my own writing 5. The story are inspired by some of the best books i like, sometimes i really wish things would turn differently on those books, hence i try to write one myself. As this is my first novel please feel free to comment or support my writing.

Doomsday Pillars

Avan

Liked by 59 people

Replies41

Williams0306Lv10Williams0306

you're doing well with the story, keep it up, you know =)

4yr

hunter97Lv5hunter97

Is it harem?

4yr

AvanAuthorAvan

Not sure how to make harem.. probably hard when the MC is married.. 😅

4yr

reannearLv4reannear

Jangan sampai jadi harem.. dont make it be apocalypse harem typical novel

4yr

AllSeeingOneLv11AllSeeingOne

If u can try finding an editor the story is great and if u could fix the grammar problem it would be better

4yr

D1vineMonarchLv5D1vineMonarch

Eu realmente gosto dese novel

4yr

cyclorazLv10cycloraz

No harem pls

4yr

DarkSorceressLv5DarkSorceress

no polygamy or harem pls

4yr

DarkSorceressLv5DarkSorceress

no polygamy or harem pls

4yr

DarkSorceressLv5DarkSorceress

no polygamy or harem pls

4yr

DarkSorceressLv5DarkSorceress

no polygamy or harem pls

4yr

DarkSorceressLv5DarkSorceress

no polygamy or harem pls

4yr

DarkSorceressLv5DarkSorceress

no polygamy or harem pls

4yr

DarkSorceressLv5DarkSorceress

no polygamy or harem pls

4yr

DarkSorceressLv5DarkSorceress

no polygamy or harem pls

4yr

NattoMakkiLv13NattoMakki

Will there a harem? Will there a romance? Is it system exist? It is 18+? Answer pls

4yr

AvanAuthorAvan

Romance yes. System yes. Maybe 15+. Harem still within consideration.

4yr

NattoMakkiLv13NattoMakki

Thanks i would start reading it. 👍👍

4yr

NattoMakkiLv13NattoMakki

Thanks i would start reading it. 👍👍

4yr

champakesLv10champakes

The synposis...

4yr