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Review Detail of Marx_Cipriano in Journey Towards Greatness

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(What I'm writing is my personal perspective over the progress of the story) Story is good What I don't like is the sudden shift of the mc's character into a lustful character That part of him is not well written and doesn't fit much into the story, it is a bit forced and unnecessary I used to like him, but man it didn't do him justice It's unbearable sometimes We don't need sex scenes, we need actual story and actions You're going far from the focus you set for yourself Frankly i find him unfaithful to his partners and the harem is turning from good to unbearably terrible

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Journey Towards Greatness

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