Review Detail of MortalAsura in Monster Integration
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The novel is truly captivating. Although initially hindered by numerous spelling and grammatical errors, I persisted and discovered a hidden gem. The story's development is exceptional, complemented by a unique power system. Michael's overpowered character is executed masterfully, yet there are moments of frustration when his friends surpass him despite his accomplishments. The narrative is rich with humor, poignant moments, and a touch of sublime romance. However, the sheer size of the story occasionally leaves gaps, possibly due to the author's solo efforts without a team to assist in filling those narrative voids. In essence, the novel is a splendid tale. Despite occasional lapses due to its expansive nature and the author's solitary efforts, the overall narrative remains a fantastic journey.
Monster Integration
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How far did u read? Do you know if the grammar gets better? I'm on chapter 186 and I do like the story. But the grammar is horrendous! I'm losing brain cells. Having OCD doesn't help. But I'm struggling through it as I'm also enjoying it. The cultivation aspect is unique and the seals thing is interesting.
I've read up to the recent chapters, and I've noticed that the grammar improves significantly around chapter 1000. Although it's a long journey, I've been listening to it instead of reading, which helped me push through. Over time, I've become accustomed to reading novels with poor grammar, so I've developed the ability to fill in the blanks effectively.
Harpreet_Ubhi:How far did u read? Do you know if the grammar gets better? I'm on chapter 186 and I do like the story. But the grammar is horrendous! I'm losing brain cells. Having OCD doesn't help. But I'm struggling through it as I'm also enjoying it. The cultivation aspect is unique and the seals thing is interesting.