There are inconsistencies like the FL and ML being said to be very close to the same strength but the ML always far overpowers the FL. Also, the ML isn’t much older than the FL but seems shocked by how strong the FL is when he is stronger. The FL is the leader of the assassin guild but always fights head in, which isn’t something an assassin would do. She should have just flashed around and killed the assassins the emperor from her birth country sent. They shouldn’t have seen her coming and just died, like their leader did at the end. She also shouldn’t have let any get away. Great translation but otherwise not good overall and the ML is particularly rough and abusive.
Qin Shuangshuang
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