Review Detail of DaoistFriend in The Craftsman

Item: The Craftsman
Rating: 2.6

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DaoistFriendLv124yrDaoistFriend

Read a few chapters and I find this novel needs a lot rewriting and editing. Chapters too short to establish and describe the MC. Story is a bit hurried. I can't relate to the MC as there are so few words.

The Craftsman

WickedQueen2

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WickedQueen2AuthorWickedQueen2

I understand the issue however I don't have the largest amount of time. What do you think about me making chapters more focused on the characters?

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