Review Detail of WickedQueen2 in The Craftsman

As of the most recent chapter I have made chapter 166, this is my honest opinion of my own book. I think I could do just about everything better than what it is currently, specifically the world background as well as fleshing out the side characters a bit more. The problem I am coming across is the world background, I highly underestimated the difficulty but I don't even know where to start. I think my general writing quality could use an enormous boost, I find that it is mediocre at best. The story is a bit better but it is developing slowly I am not 100% sure it is fast enough. The one thing I am happiest with is the stability, I have always had a problem with focusing and by having this to do everyday really helps. All in all, this is my passion and everyone I go to write another chapter and it shows the increase in views I feel so overwhelmed. I can only say thank you, so thanks!!!