Review Detail of StormEliteVII in Supreme Origin: Time King

I hope everyone enjoys this novel, I only started working on it a few months ago when I truly started learning how to write in english. So, it still needs a lot of editing, each chapter takes about 3 to 4 hours to record and 3 more to edit. I'll try to post more regularly. For now I'll try to write 5 chapters a week and as long as I'm better at my writing, I'll post more. [From the way I want to write, I'm going to finish by the end of December, if nothing happens.]