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StormEliteVII

StormEliteVII

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A Brazilian who likes to read and play games.

2018-06-02 JoinedBrazil
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  • StormEliteVII
    StormEliteVII2mth
    Replied to jquick2020

    It's Brazilian Portuguese. Already fixed.

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  • StormEliteVII
    StormEliteVII10mth
    Replied to NormL

    No problem and thanks for the feedback. I initially started studying english in mid 2017, stopped for a few months then returned so I'm not that much proficient yet since I'm still learning. As for the proofreader, it's a little hard at the moment but I agree with you.

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    StormEliteVII1yr
    Replied to readtokilltime

    Thank you for your thoughts. The reason I put a little more action into this section of the story is because the next arc will be more about the deities' past and will have more dialogue and world building than action.

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    StormEliteVII1yr
    Replied to ReimanCordeiro

    Thanks for the feedback. I plan on releasing one chapter between 1000-2000 words from Monday to Friday or in the Monday, Wednesday and Friday.

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    StormEliteVII1yr
    Replied to Dylan_Powell_1568

    it is explained later on, but soon as the last chapetrs are released in the next few days, I wll be correcting all mistakes and adding things I may have forgotten.

    Elijah was dining alone in the inn, thinking deeply about everything he had seen in that dream. Though the dream had ended the moment he saw Chloe, everything was so real as if all this had actually happened.
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