Review Detail of Villain_Rai in Phoenix's flame
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The story is great and all and I also liked the way you used English so clearly , honestly the way of you utilizing English makes me jealous because I am not good at that .The story was too short , this is only my opinion but if the chapter 1 - 4 had been a single chapter since they takes place in class , the chapter would not only be long enough for the readers to be engrossed but also had been a complete episode .I want to write many things but I won't . if you don't mind me then can you send me your Facebook account or something like that where I can talk to you in private chat or something like that ?after all , getting to know another author is extremely advantageous to an author like us .I will be waiting for your id account , I hope you will send it to me .[img=recommend][img=recommend]
Phoenix's flame
Annisax
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but still, the execution is much refined compared to mine . if I had your level of skill, I would have done much better than now .any way this is also why I wanted to have private conversation with you so to learn many things from you which I lack .
Annisax:Nothing to be jealous about đ we are all learning
Villain_Rai:but still, the execution is much refined compared to mine . if I had your level of skill, I would have done much better than now .any way this is also why I wanted to have private conversation with you so to learn many things from you which I lack .