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Villain_Rai

Villain_Rai

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2023-06-03 JoinedGlobal
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  • Villain_Rai
    Villain_Rai6mth
    Replied to Save_AllThe_Worlds

    Search Blank Limbu and you can find a profile with the same name where Madara Uchiha is kept as profile picture, that's my fb account

    Ch 1 Dusk Gold Dreadclaw Bear
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    Douluo Dalu : The Enigmatic Journey
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  • Villain_Rai
    Villain_Rai6mth
    Replied to Save_AllThe_Worlds

    Hey friend, when will you send me your novel link, I am eagerly waiting for the show. Or you can send me your incomplete version story too through Facebook or social media, I want to read it and can't wait any longer

    Ch 1 Dusk Gold Dreadclaw Bear
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    Douluo Dalu : The Enigmatic Journey
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  • Villain_Rai
    Villain_Rai6mth
    Replied to Save_AllThe_Worlds

    I hope you would complete it soon and I wish you the best

    Ch 2 Nuoding City
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    Douluo Dalu : The Unrestrained Demons
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  • Villain_Rai
    Villain_Rai6mth
    Replied to Save_AllThe_Worlds

    Send me your novel link

    Ch 2 Nuoding City
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    Douluo Dalu : The Unrestrained Demons
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  • Villain_Rai
    Villain_Rai6mth
    Replied to Save_AllThe_Worlds

    I will visit your work and leave a comment and review, maybe some personal opinion and suggestion as well. As for taking those suggestions and opinion, it is all up to you.

    Ch 2 Nuoding City
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    Douluo Dalu : The Unrestrained Demons
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  • Villain_Rai
    Villain_Rai7mth
    Replied to Nyx_Alexander17

    thats his current mentality

    "As for my background, make me an orphan where my dead parents have left me with multi-billion dollar legacy where I have fully inherited their inheritance " Sagar continues " Also, make me look like Broly from dragonball z movie and not from dragonball super broly movie"
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    The Undisputed Monarch
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  • Villain_Rai
    Villain_Rai7mth
    Replied to Nyx_Alexander17

    readers's voting will decide

    "Where am I ?" Sagar observes his surroundings with his observant eyes, only finding emptiness and dark void around him.
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    The Undisputed Monarch
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  • Villain_Rai
    Villain_Rai9mth
    Replied to Villain_Rai

    oh , and also please check my [ Criminal Mind ] it has three chapters . I hope you will read and rate it

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    Phoenix's flame
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  • Villain_Rai
    Villain_Rai9mth
    Replied to Annisax

    but still, the execution is much refined compared to mine . if I had your level of skill, I would have done much better than now .any way this is also why I wanted to have private conversation with you so to learn many things from you which I lack .

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  • Villain_Rai
    Villain_Rai9mth
    Replied to Alpha1444

    you can visit my Villain Above Villains novel and get it a try

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    Witch: Accumulate Experience Through The Knight Breathing Technique
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  • Villain_Rai
    Villain_Rai9mth
    Posted

    although when reading the story , one may feel like it is slow-paced but if you rethink about it , you will realize that the story is going well and smoothly since this story is romance genres unlike action and cultivation novel .the author has done well writing the story very beautifully , choosing each and every word taking his or her time .Although there are some mistakes found , maybe they are done by auto correction or something like that . after all even in my novels , no matter how much I recheck my chapters before releasing there are always some mistakes found .I just hope that the author won't rush too much and destroy this beautiful art written well .if I have to say , I have only read till chapter 3 since I am not big fan of romance novels . but the author seem to take it slow while building the world and background which is pretty thoughtful of him or her .of course , I just hope from the author to not panic and focus on the destination for now rather than trying to force the story since a forced story will never be success .do it slow but make it reasonable .best of luck author, if you have time than we can share each other's opinion with each other while chatting in fb. my Facebook account name is Blank Limbu and the profile picture is of madara uchiha. I hope you would send me friend request and we can learn from each other .

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    FROST And FLAME: The Forgotten Queen
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  • Villain_Rai
    Villain_Rai9mth
    Commented

    I will take you where her highness is .

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    FROST And FLAME: The Forgotten Queen
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  • Villain_Rai
    Villain_Rai9mth
    Commented

    why are you disturbing ......also do remember our promise from the discussions to help each others .

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  • Villain_Rai
    Villain_Rai9mth
    Commented

    she said weakly .

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  • Villain_Rai
    Villain_Rai9mth
    Commented

    I wanted to rate your novel but since the story is short and not much information is revealed , I will rate it in the future . And also , a suggestion from me with my peronpersonal experince . While writing the novel , please don't rush, write the story with details and no unnecessary details , make sure to convey the emotions and feelings of the characters to the readers , try to end the chapter with cliffhanger , if your story is about romance then please don't put just sweetness and make it bittersweet . Also , my fb account is Blank Limbu with madara uchiha as the profile , please send me friend request so we can discuss about writing , novel and our works with each other so we can learn from each other .

    Ch 1 Enlistment: (1)
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  • Villain_Rai
    Villain_Rai9mth
    Commented

    For now , the story seem to be good but if I have to say , why not describe the side characters clearly like the main leads . This will help you create a background . It is only my opinion but in the future , instead of girl1, boy1 and etc , why don't you describe them with a name and narrate their emotions as well ? For now I can't say anything since the story is short and is vague , not complete . But if I have to say , please try to write a little longer compared to first chapter . Why not try to write around 2000+ words .

    Ch 1 Enlistment: (1)
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  • Villain_Rai
    Villain_Rai9mth
    Posted

    The story is great and all and I also liked the way you used English so clearly , honestly the way of you utilizing English makes me jealous because I am not good at that .The story was too short , this is only my opinion but if the chapter 1 - 4 had been a single chapter since they takes place in class , the chapter would not only be long enough for the readers to be engrossed but also had been a complete episode .I want to write many things but I won't . if you don't mind me then can you send me your Facebook account or something like that where I can talk to you in private chat or something like that ?after all , getting to know another author is extremely advantageous to an author like us .I will be waiting for your id account , I hope you will send it to me .[img=recommend][img=recommend]

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    Phoenix's flame
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  • Villain_Rai
    Villain_Rai9mth
    Posted

    since everything starts with point zero , I will be the one rate my novel .please leave the rating and your opinion here if you like my work because it will be a great help if you rate my novel .I hope everyone will support me and my work .

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  • Villain_Rai
    Villain_Rai9mth
    Replied to EasternRiver

    Spoiler : Void is Wudi but there is also a twist which will confirm that he is not Wudi but at the sametime he is Wudi .

    Ch 42 Smiling Clown-man
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    Abandon 123
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  • Villain_Rai
    Villain_Rai10mth
    Replied to Lilbroomstick9

    in my country as long as you are 5 feet , you are at least consider tall and average

    The young man is tall , around 5'6 feet and has slim yet muscular stature .
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