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although when reading the story , one may feel like it is slow-paced but if you rethink about it , you will realize that the story is going well and smoothly since this story is romance genres unlike action and cultivation novel .the author has done well writing the story very beautifully , choosing each and every word taking his or her time .Although there are some mistakes found , maybe they are done by auto correction or something like that . after all even in my novels , no matter how much I recheck my chapters before releasing there are always some mistakes found .I just hope that the author won't rush too much and destroy this beautiful art written well .if I have to say , I have only read till chapter 3 since I am not big fan of romance novels . but the author seem to take it slow while building the world and background which is pretty thoughtful of him or her .of course , I just hope from the author to not panic and focus on the destination for now rather than trying to force the story since a forced story will never be success .do it slow but make it reasonable .best of luck author, if you have time than we can share each other's opinion with each other while chatting in fb. my Facebook account name is Blank Limbu and the profile picture is of madara uchiha. I hope you would send me friend request and we can learn from each other .
I will take you where her highness is .
why are you disturbing ......also do remember our promise from the discussions to help each others .
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I wanted to rate your novel but since the story is short and not much information is revealed , I will rate it in the future . And also , a suggestion from me with my peronpersonal experince . While writing the novel , please don't rush, write the story with details and no unnecessary details , make sure to convey the emotions and feelings of the characters to the readers , try to end the chapter with cliffhanger , if your story is about romance then please don't put just sweetness and make it bittersweet . Also , my fb account is Blank Limbu with madara uchiha as the profile , please send me friend request so we can discuss about writing , novel and our works with each other so we can learn from each other .
For now , the story seem to be good but if I have to say , why not describe the side characters clearly like the main leads . This will help you create a background . It is only my opinion but in the future , instead of girl1, boy1 and etc , why don't you describe them with a name and narrate their emotions as well ? For now I can't say anything since the story is short and is vague , not complete . But if I have to say , please try to write a little longer compared to first chapter . Why not try to write around 2000+ words .
The story is great and all and I also liked the way you used English so clearly , honestly the way of you utilizing English makes me jealous because I am not good at that .The story was too short , this is only my opinion but if the chapter 1 - 4 had been a single chapter since they takes place in class , the chapter would not only be long enough for the readers to be engrossed but also had been a complete episode .I want to write many things but I won't . if you don't mind me then can you send me your Facebook account or something like that where I can talk to you in private chat or something like that ?after all , getting to know another author is extremely advantageous to an author like us .I will be waiting for your id account , I hope you will send it to me .[img=recommend][img=recommend]
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