Review Detail of Woshi in Reborn In The Three Kingdoms
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Brain hurty. Hard to read. Rather than using grammarly just use chat.gpt much better for flow. Grammarly only fixes grammatical structure, spelling, and maybe vocabulary enhancement but chat.gpt should be able to make it flow a lot better. Other than that from what I've read so far I don't think this is worth chat gpting but good luck.
Reborn In The Three Kingdoms
Tang12
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It's a case of the writing is 'grammatically correct' but they don't bounce from one sentence to another. "Lie Fan and Sun Tzu began squabbling about who's right and wrong until Lie Fan admit defeat due to his brain cells not enough to argue with an advanced futuristic entity" The beginning part is okay, it flows well but when it reaches 'until Lie Fan admit defeat" and onward it disrupts the previous flow. It should be "Lie Fan and Sun Tzu began squabbling about/on who's right and wrong until Lie Fan admitted defeat, unable to keep up with this futuristic entity." Advanced is pretty much synonymous with futuristic so you don't need to double stack it. There's also problems with tenses here and there Original: "After checking the Status window and a bit of daydreaming when he conquers all of china and become(s) emperor Lie Fan remember something important that happens every time at novels with a system " Revised: "After checking the Status window and daydreaming of conquering all of china as emperor Lie Fan, he remembered something important that happens concerning novels and systems" The problem isn't solely the minor errors here and there but the case of appearing every now and then. It disrupts reading flow and bugs out reader's automatic correction in their brains.
Tang12:Thank you for the review but may I know what causes it too hard to read other than the grammar? Because I would like to know more rather than just to saying it's not worth to read even after fixing the grammar, thank you!
I see thank you for informing me of this! While I can't change what had been written, I keep it in mind when creating the next chapters and I hope you can give RTK another chance!
Woshi:It's a case of the writing is 'grammatically correct' but they don't bounce from one sentence to another. "Lie Fan and Sun Tzu began squabbling about who's right and wrong until Lie Fan admit defeat due to his brain cells not enough to argue with an advanced futuristic entity" The beginning part is okay, it flows well but when it reaches 'until Lie Fan admit defeat" and onward it disrupts the previous flow. It should be "Lie Fan and Sun Tzu began squabbling about/on who's right and wrong until Lie Fan admitted defeat, unable to keep up with this futuristic entity." Advanced is pretty much synonymous with futuristic so you don't need to double stack it. There's also problems with tenses here and there Original: "After checking the Status window and a bit of daydreaming when he conquers all of china and become(s) emperor Lie Fan remember something important that happens every time at novels with a system " Revised: "After checking the Status window and daydreaming of conquering all of china as emperor Lie Fan, he remembered something important that happens concerning novels and systems" The problem isn't solely the minor errors here and there but the case of appearing every now and then. It disrupts reading flow and bugs out reader's automatic correction in their brains.
Don't use chat gpt. It tends to write overly descriptive sentences, while killing the original style of the author. It's honestly, just a tool that makes your novel seem the same as everything else out there, in the same style and words. I got PTSD from reading that lazy style...
Tang12:I see thank you for informing me of this! While I can't change what had been written, I keep it in mind when creating the next chapters and I hope you can give RTK another chance!
Yes of course I understand, I may use it just to help me flow some of the narrative or dialogues better
B0mbaCl0ck:Don't use chat gpt. It tends to write overly descriptive sentences, while killing the original style of the author. It's honestly, just a tool that makes your novel seem the same as everything else out there, in the same style and words. I got PTSD from reading that lazy style...