Review Detail of Equinox in Guild Wars
Review detail
I was enjoying this story so much I binge read up to chapter 200 in 2 days and everything was going well until the author decided to make Zaine sleep with another women, and Eva allowed her to without Dracos knowledge. Later the author tries to play it off as that girl from the Church of Light was close to becoming obsessed with Eva so Zaine slept with her to move that obsession over to her since Eva is so much more important than every other women, but that doesn't change the fact that she made Draco a cuckold which is a big no-no for me. Also it doesn't make any since for that to of happened. Thay girls obsession came because she saw Eva's face and when thay happened Eva was going to kill her bit didnt because she was in a good mood so clearly they arent worried about the consequences of killing someone from the Church of Light so it makes zero sense to make Draco a cuckold. And to top it all off Zaine was pregnant with Dracos child at the time of her doing it too which in my eyes made it infinitely worse.
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Kotario:That’s fine, I’m not gonna bother reiterating what has already been explained and nothing will change anyway, so 🤷🏼.
Bro, there would have been pretty bad consequences if she didn’t do any of that and plus, it wasn’t even that bad, it was for the good and no attachments were made between Zaine and the girl except the girl being obsessed. Somethings gotta be done and even though I too hate NTR, this wasn’t even proper NTR. Zaine just seduced her and did some dirty stuff so the girl didn’t disrupt any of Eva’s bidding, that’s that and nothing more. Also, Draco’s already a cuckold if you can even call it that when Eva supposedly cheated the Draco before the reincarnation.
Equinox:What do you mean explained? I would really like to know.
How could a little maid that has no power disrupt anything? Plus what's the difference between being obsessed with Eva and being obsessed with Zaine? Sure Eva is infinitely more important than Zaine but she is still his women and pregnant with his child. Plus Eva never actually slept with that guy and her choice to sacrifice herself for Dracos life wasn't even her own as her mind was altered, so while still bad it cant compare to actually sleeping with someone else.
Kotario:That’s fine, I’m not gonna bother reiterating what has already been explained and nothing will change anyway, so 🤷🏼.