Review Detail of xcrusnik07x in New Game+

Good concepts, world construction is okay, but writing quality makes the story so hard to read. Theres constant grammar mistakes that make the story impossible to read. Also dont bother over explaining every little detail when it just pokes more holes in your story. For example, beginning of the story it describes faster than sound movement due to increase brain perception. The problem with any form a acceleration in physics is force generated due to change in any velocity vectors. At that instant ”speed of sound” would put an unrealistic g force load on the human body.