xcrusnik07x
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challenge accepted 👍
How i met your mother?
insert dark souls music here lol
halo
dad of the year?
insert pokemon evolving theme
HA as a man of culture I accept your challenge
2 of 3 will he catch them all lol
when that one twitch streamer carries you through the game
amd she broke
inception and mind fxxkery at its finest
tko..... you win!
no wonder divine beast go extinct
old ww2 planes but those are rare as most planes have been converted then to still use petrol or gasoline that would still require a spark
Good concepts, world construction is okay, but writing quality makes the story so hard to read. Theres constant grammar mistakes that make the story impossible to read. Also dont bother over explaining every little detail when it just pokes more holes in your story. For example, beginning of the story it describes faster than sound movement due to increase brain perception. The problem with any form a acceleration in physics is force generated due to change in any velocity vectors. At that instant ”speed of sound” would put an unrealistic g force load on the human body.
ya no love the whole brain increase thing but unless this mythical device solves inertia turning or stopping turn your insides into mush