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SageGodVerhar
SageGodVerharLv105yrSageGodVerhar

This is a 2 star for many reasons and I will list some of the problems. 1. it is a dog eat dog world yet nothing makes sense at all. He becomes Godzilla and everything is okay until he meets Alice. She has nothing to do with him, but he decides to protect her for no real reason. 2. Dragons are Rare or supposedly but Kira meets a new dragon almost every 2 to 3 chapters. If it is a male dragon he just kills them and ends it, but the female ones he becomes stupid that he does whatever they want him to do. 3/4/5. This is a dog eat dog world yet all the leaders are females why. The author says because he hates how the leaders of other novels are male and wanted to change that is alright, but the problem is this is a dog eat dog world, not a Japanese fantasy world. He basically made the men in this world become nothing more than just mindless slaves. I am sorry, but this would not work at all as men have a better way of hiding their emotions then women do as women tend to act more to their emotional side. This is why in these types of worlds men are the leaders. Another thing is that everyone here is a mindless idiot with no IQ. First, the leaders which are always female just say go kill if its dangerous. This is how this so-called dog eats dog world known to be mediocre and how a woman would not have survived long enough to become a leader by the way the author presents them. They could easily capture and tame the beast/dragon or negotiate with it to pull to their side yet they set off a mission to kill them instead without them doing anything. 6. Kira is irresponsible with his powers and his personality does not make sense at all. First, he says Alice protecting her with his life next when humans come to try to kill her he stops and spares them. The author says he does this because of his human personality still with him yet he killed a dragon a day ago and has no remorse for it. He plays around with his powers trying to play with Alice the red dragon and ends up killing millions of demons yet show little remorse like oh I felt bad and that is it. This does not seem like a human personality to me. 7. In Kingdoms, you have Kings and Queens as the leaders, but in Empire, the leaders are called Emperor and Empress. The Human Empire has a queen and King. 8. People get ridiculous power-ups in the next chapter with no explanation why. 9. The updates are good, but the problem is that whenever he updates the ranking of people and monsters he used a new chapter giving false hope when he could just add them to the Auxillary it makes reading more smoother. 10. The conversation between people is quite awkward along with the POV changes. 11. Another thing about Dog eat Dog world is scheming there is no scheming. The makes the world Background become a one as this story is everything, but dog eats dog world. 12. Godzilla is asexual if I am not mistaken making mating useless for it.

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ThatAstralPunk
ThatAstralPunkLv4ThatAstralPunk

That’s a lot... But, I still hope author will explain it more carefully when he make other novel.

ThatAstralPunk
ThatAstralPunkLv4ThatAstralPunk

That’s a lot... But, I still hope author will explain it more carefully when he make other novel.

lIl
lIlLv5lIl

I agree with you on every point except 7. Empires can have Kings and Queens.

BlackInk
BlackInkLv6BlackInk

Oh Gosh... I wish you could do that for my novel XD

Dani3l
Dani3lLv5Dani3l

Yeah i could read it only till chapter 6 xoulnd stand it anymore because of the title and how it started him killing the dragon i thought it will be a action cool novel but then he becomw so stupid and everrything so cute annoyng as hellbut hey good luck

tahafury
tahafuryLv5tahafury

wait when did your point 8 come into play???

AxcZ
AxcZLv5AxcZ

I think what he means was the top most of the leader chains. If it is, is still the Emperor from the highest then Empress then Crown Prince / King (as usually it was a title/position for other prince other than crown prince or the siblings of the current emperor). He mentioned that is wrong because it wasn't the Leader of an Empire.

lIl:I agree with you on every point except 7. Empires can have Kings and Queens.
SageGodVerhar
SageGodVerharLv10SageGodVerhar

Black Dragon Queen

tahafury:wait when did your point 8 come into play???
Supreme_Turtle
Supreme_TurtleLv14Supreme_Turtle

Lol i just caught up to your latest update, ive been a fan for a awhile but let it build as i was waiting for more content after the comet

BlackInk:Oh Gosh... I wish you could do that for my novel XD
Supreme_Turtle
Supreme_TurtleLv14Supreme_Turtle

Lol i just caught up to your latest update, ive been a fan for a awhile but let it build as i was waiting for more content after the comet

BlackInk:Oh Gosh... I wish you could do that for my novel XD
BlackInk
BlackInkLv6BlackInk

Wait... Supreme Turtle... Didn't you have a lion avatar? Of course I won't recognize you if you change it!

Supreme_Turtle:Lol i just caught up to your latest update, ive been a fan for a awhile but let it build as i was waiting for more content after the comet
Supreme_Turtle
Supreme_TurtleLv14Supreme_Turtle

Lol when i started reading your novel I didn’t have a pic but lions are my favourite animal lol

BlackInk:Wait... Supreme Turtle... Didn't you have a lion avatar? Of course I won't recognize you if you change it!
SrDickinocada
SrDickinocadaLv3SrDickinocada

Dude, I came to read the fanfic, thinking. Finally! No harem, no MC pussy and clichés in general. But .... the reality is sad! Any man is more the servant of women in this world! MC is cruel with male monsters or even with other races! Women? It's unbelievable to read an MC pussy like this! This reminded me of Yun Che from ATG! Sigh ...

Macabuu
MacabuuLv4Macabuu

Well I was wondering how this novel with Godzilla in it has a harem tag..now I know why.

TheLastArk
TheLastArkLv12TheLastArk

Well the main character personality usually depends on the personality the author is most familiar with and can relate to an some way which kinda gaves a reason for the women has power thing and the unrealistic protected for Female characters and why the book so far didn’t mention any women actually dying. A high chance the author has a submissive personality or for some other reason wants a women to have more power

Lemni
LemniLv12Lemni

Sadly most of novels are like this and people believe its a mind gem of story creation . Thanks for the info in review i can skip another sad passage when i get dissapointed by how much of the base idea was ruined.

Lemni
LemniLv12Lemni

.. T_T magic fills the internet and far too many novels on webnov are like this

SrDickinocada:Dude, I came to read the fanfic, thinking. Finally! No harem, no MC pussy and clichés in general. But .... the reality is sad! Any man is more the servant of women in this world! MC is cruel with male monsters or even with other races! Women? It's unbelievable to read an MC pussy like this! This reminded me of Yun Che from ATG! Sigh ...
HansTheCool
HansTheCoolLv5HansTheCool

Hey man, we can't blame him for having strict females govern the world, After all that might be his deepest and darkest fantasy

Quidanstealsnovels
QuidanstealsnovelsLv10Quidanstealsnovels

The author is likely a feminist or a whiteknight lmao, i'll be dodging this novel i think.

TrueTych
TrueTychLv5TrueTych

I think they are referring to hell mode and the fact that Kira only needs to sleep to gain more power

tahafury:wait when did your point 8 come into play???