Review Detail of LonleyTyrant in Tales Of Demons and Gods : Dao Of Patience

Thank you for the feedback and advice, will fix the grammer as per your suggestions (Nice suggestion by the way ) and don't worry wont take that part as the one in the orignal had experience in a lot of things not just plain knowledge while the fanfic char. here only has knowledge. Ps. If you have any other suggestions please let me know, it never hurts to make things better than they are.

I reccomend when he starts cultivating not to give some op bullsh*t techniques but instead have go from one to another one an example his first one would build a good foundation while the next is suited for his first demon spirit. This will just give the whole process of cultivation more context and depth compared to the original it will also act as a good way to give the mc some useful ability in the story an example you could claim the cultivation technique has a stealth skill or something and when he changes the technique you could change or add new ones making your character change, grow and adapt all over making him more interesting. I also recommend this with demon spirits compared to the whole god growth rate bit have swap around and if you want the food growth rate just give a demon spirit with that at a later part of the story like when he joins a sect or something.

Had the similar idea about cultivation technique, what I had in mind was an Op but slow cultivating, stealth + Multiple demon spirts but really slow speed, should take him a few years to reach legend rank. As for the demon spirit well that will be a pretty good surprise on whats next to come.

That moment when u realise u wrote slow speed twice but there is no edit option 😱.

Sorry didn't see this reply. Honestly you make it sound like your just recreating nie li in a new character with the library instead of his past life and this technique you describe instead of the heavenly god technique and to me personally this is a very unappealing concept because it was because of his vs knowledge and that technique that made me begin to lose interest in him then the author with his great plot holes and practically dropping of the novel was what made me lose the rest of my interest in it and u fear you may be heading down a similar path. But this is just my opinion and by bo means want to offend you so if this has in anyway I apologize.

Nope not recreating Nei Li, read enough fanfic dont wana follow the route, knowledge was necessary or else it will never add up on how a char. can power up in the novel, thats the only thing that cannot be removed :( For Having different demon spirits part let me write about it first then get back to me if its good enough ? Ps. The only reason for multiple demon spirits is having different elemental attacks. Or i could just swap it for a demon spirit that has a lot of attributes, the only problem would be that the demon beasts of that race would be far too OP. if I did so.