Hello there dear readers.my apologies for keeping you waiting, but I'm happy to announce the next chapter will be released by the end of January 2024.Once again my apologies on the wait, you all know how hectic real life can be.

Thanks for the comment, As to the external spirit bone. I do have a plan for the spirit beast I just don't want it to put heaps into the first volume and wanted to save some plot points for later volumes

Thanks for the comment, The main reason to the whole monologue is to do with the witting style I am trying to emulate along with my desire to convey the character's thoughts during that time.

Thanks for the comment, While it is a good idea to have him create such a thing. I feel that it would either need to be explained multiple time to multiple characters, I would also need to explain how he keeps a spirit ability going permanently

Hello There First thank you for the review it means a lot especially when I had no others and wasn't sure if people liked this or not. Second do not worry our beloved MC will be getting some more powerful spirit abilities in the future, I am just trying to avoid making him over-powered early. Third I intend for the MC to progressively become evil so it might take some time but he will be a villain.

A story with potential as it has a fairly unique idea. But unfortunately the writing quality makes it difficult to read as many parts of it are either poorly spelt or misleading due to use of the wrong words

Hello There. My reader you have asked the questions I have been waiting for... unfortunately I can't answer them without spoiling a later volume so please forgive me. As for what I can say basically the Xie clan has a combination of internal issues and arrogant people who only think of themselves. It will be explored in more detail in a later volume. Besides all that thank you for reading and commenting it means a lot

Hello therethanks for the commentAs for why going to shrek. it's because of two reasons.first when I write the character and his actions I use a perspective of a person who wants both the 'easy' path and one with the most benefits and as he is a character that has knowledge of the books it makes Shrek the best action to take as he would want to take advantage of Tang San.Secondly alot of other fanfictions have thier OCs going to spirit hall and I felt it would be harder to explain how the MC does some of the things he does if he was there.If your concerned about him just falling into Tang San's group or anything like that then don't worry it won't happen and unfortunately I can't say why as it will spoil future chapters if I did.

Hello there dear readerThank you for reading and commenting it means alot.As for you questions No there will be no harem in this story.Yes there will be romance though it is of a dark nature.

congratulations my reader you are the first person to comment on this work and it means a lot thank you.As for the nerfs do not worry my dear reader the light is at the end of the tunnel

This review is written after reading the first 55 chapters. Potential Spoiler Warning ⚠️ This story is very interesting as it makes good use of a system in the beginning making it so that the protagonist is not just taking the orignal protagonist(Issei) place, it also keeps true to the other characters from different worlds which shows that the Author had a fair understanding of the characters they chose. The Author also makes use of powers from different worlds and make a good effort to blend them together. The only fault I personally find is that the OC protagonist goes from being weak to strong to overpowered at a extremely fast rate along with the fact that despite it being a DXD world the protagonist isn't very involved in it till after the first 40 chapters. It is also of notice that OC uses his original given power(Annihilation Maker) to create and grant himself the powers of other anime characters and while I understand this and would honestly do the same if I was reincarnated into this situation tho I do personally find it to be a bit of a interest killer as it causes a originally interesting character to come off as a character who just has the powers off all anime. All in all a good story with some interesting plot ideas and good character use with only the power balance being my issue.

The word Immortal in most eastern works book primarily those that originate from China use the word immortal to mean not mortal/ordinary or in description of something that has exceed a previous limit. Instead of how its more commonly used to describe something that cannot die/perish in any way. It also common to associate Immortal with positive or good entities while using words like demon or devil for those of negative or evil aspects. This information is produced from my own experience reading and should not be taken as fact as it may be wrong.

this is honestly a good book unfortunately the translation reduces it to the point that you have no idea what's happening and the only way you make any progress in this book is through one's own thoughts and understanding. unless you find other materials of this such as on reddit, the manga/manhua or a better translation it will become both difficult and somewhat tiring to make it pass the first dozen or so chapters.

This book is like getting together with a fellow reader and talking about all you loved and hated in the original story. It shows you what they thought and expected if the story and how it is similar and different than your own and is honestly a really nice read just for that.

I honestly am amazed that the author has gone so far with his book in my experience most stop before the 100th chapter. They have successfully made a good story and tho the writing quality is somewhat "meh" it not a big deal.

Honestly one of the best DD fanfiction. I especially enjoy the fact that the OC dosen't come across as the most over powered existence since Goku and the interaction of the character is done really well.

While a fun and interesting story. It is so fast past with either time skips or sudden jumps in power the protagonist ends up over powered in honestly no time and deals with everything like there chores.

Touya hasn't gotten a girlfriend yet. We also got the content of Black and White 2

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An honestly amazing story and one of my favorite fan-fics. The ideas the author has are great are many time thing I would never even think could happen tho I must admit the having the OC be around Tang San has resulted in it becoming more of just Tang San's story retold.