Review Detail of Goblin_Kun in Goblin Progenitor
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Whoops i hit all 5 stars! Must be a my own novel/Author thing?! :) If ya got any questions about the series, i can answer them here on this post best i think. Thank you for reading!
Goblin Progenitor
Goblin_Kun
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I am considering the story to be along the lines of one of my favorites "Re:Monster" I have thought of the following categories that will definitely be in it. System Fantasy Kingdom building (goblin building) Gathering(making) of companions Mature/Ecchi (not specifically sexy *** *** "see more below") Drama Harem Comedy (i like to mix in comedy to lighten the mood now and again) Anti-Dense Protagonist (crossing fingers here for jon!) The Mature Tag i have mostly so i can describe things without to many limits (violence/horrible situations/evil acts) (as goblins are not nice creatures or any of the other dark denizers of the world i intent to build are not Mr. nice guys (as in GoblinSlayer goblins) so a lot of unnecessary violence and horrible acts might be described in some detail. Though describing sexual acts in vivid details with long scenes and all the wet sticky sounds you can make in words. is not what its gonna be about. At best i will keep those to the beginning and endings of such scenes (mostly because i do not believe in my abilities to write such scenes well at all, but situations will occur, i worry about my ability to write this so in advance my apologies if cringes occur.) There will be a heavy theme about the necessity of it though as the story unfolds. (Progenitor being the clue there) But any other specific theme tags i cannot really specify at this time. (i am trying to build on my general concept of the story/world/characters, and have a lot i want to write for now at least) But how to cope as a goblin in such a world is a lot of whats its gonna be about! Hope you will continue to enjoy it! do let me know of any of your thoughts!
Tandelle:Can you tell us a bit about the genre this story is going to be about, I love to know. e.g: Harem/Drama/Fantasy/Mature???? Love your story so far, you have my support.
All hail the Anti-Dense Protagonist, For he shale rain Supreme!!!! all jokes aside, Re:monster started with the protagonist with a starter group(his brothers/Sisters?) which he lead them and made them in a group that works with other races(plus the slaves stuff) Your story has start very different and the goblins seem less.... (how do you say this with being mean?)intelligent? I get the image that they will be more barbaric then we see them in other books (don't tell me if I am right, I will find out later when I read more chapters) my only advice is to take some inspiration from re:monster (Maybe Green Skin as well) but do your on thing, make it unique and stand out, most importantly Have fun writing this story P.S: MORE CHAPTERS!!! I want to know what happens to the mother, MORE CHAPTERS!!!!
Goblin_Kun:I am considering the story to be along the lines of one of my favorites "Re:Monster" I have thought of the following categories that will definitely be in it. System Fantasy Kingdom building (goblin building) Gathering(making) of companions Mature/Ecchi (not specifically sexy *** *** "see more below") Drama Harem Comedy (i like to mix in comedy to lighten the mood now and again) Anti-Dense Protagonist (crossing fingers here for jon!) The Mature Tag i have mostly so i can describe things without to many limits (violence/horrible situations/evil acts) (as goblins are not nice creatures or any of the other dark denizers of the world i intent to build are not Mr. nice guys (as in GoblinSlayer goblins) so a lot of unnecessary violence and horrible acts might be described in some detail. Though describing sexual acts in vivid details with long scenes and all the wet sticky sounds you can make in words. is not what its gonna be about. At best i will keep those to the beginning and endings of such scenes (mostly because i do not believe in my abilities to write such scenes well at all, but situations will occur, i worry about my ability to write this so in advance my apologies if cringes occur.) There will be a heavy theme about the necessity of it though as the story unfolds. (Progenitor being the clue there) But any other specific theme tags i cannot really specify at this time. (i am trying to build on my general concept of the story/world/characters, and have a lot i want to write for now at least) But how to cope as a goblin in such a world is a lot of whats its gonna be about! Hope you will continue to enjoy it! do let me know of any of your thoughts!
Yes the goblins in this world are not smart creatures. Especially when they are newborn :P :) i am thinking the goblins in this world are alot more like goblins from GoblinSlayer universe. basically along the lines of a small child in intelligence but there are some that evolve and become ruthlessly cunning and/or intelligent. The bit from Re:monster i would be picking off from mostly would be how he got companions - which i think i got a new special outtake on! And thank you for reading! i am really having fun with it! Also i got that chapter for you! DONT BITE! ITS COMING! *waps with broom stick* Back i tell you! back! chapters are coming!
Tandelle:All hail the Anti-Dense Protagonist, For he shale rain Supreme!!!! all jokes aside, Re:monster started with the protagonist with a starter group(his brothers/Sisters?) which he lead them and made them in a group that works with other races(plus the slaves stuff) Your story has start very different and the goblins seem less.... (how do you say this with being mean?)intelligent? I get the image that they will be more barbaric then we see them in other books (don't tell me if I am right, I will find out later when I read more chapters) my only advice is to take some inspiration from re:monster (Maybe Green Skin as well) but do your on thing, make it unique and stand out, most importantly Have fun writing this story P.S: MORE CHAPTERS!!! I want to know what happens to the mother, MORE CHAPTERS!!!!
i have picked to not described it in detail in the story. but goblins being goblins it is in the story
Mile:how about rape?
Yes indeed, it will feature heavily, i really liked re:monster due to this fact that his companions changed alot this way
Geeman:So will you be adding in the aspect of evolution like Re:Monster (One of my favourite aspects of the novel) for example evolving into hobgoblin etc..
Goblin_Kun:i have picked to not described it in detail in the story. but goblins being goblins it is in the story
Chaotic_Winter:Goblin and no ***, is weird I suppose hahaha However is it gonna be harem? And really hope no ntr
Chaotic_Winter:Goblin and no ***, is weird I suppose hahaha However is it gonna be harem? And really hope no ntr
Yes i would give it that tag as the story progresses. The Mc becomes a leader of a community and tries to survive in the world of being a goblin.
Nadare17:is this kingdom building?
Goblin_Kun:I am considering the story to be along the lines of one of my favorites "Re:Monster" I have thought of the following categories that will definitely be in it. System Fantasy Kingdom building (goblin building) Gathering(making) of companions Mature/Ecchi (not specifically sexy *** *** "see more below") Drama Harem Comedy (i like to mix in comedy to lighten the mood now and again) Anti-Dense Protagonist (crossing fingers here for jon!) The Mature Tag i have mostly so i can describe things without to many limits (violence/horrible situations/evil acts) (as goblins are not nice creatures or any of the other dark denizers of the world i intent to build are not Mr. nice guys (as in GoblinSlayer goblins) so a lot of unnecessary violence and horrible acts might be described in some detail. Though describing sexual acts in vivid details with long scenes and all the wet sticky sounds you can make in words. is not what its gonna be about. At best i will keep those to the beginning and endings of such scenes (mostly because i do not believe in my abilities to write such scenes well at all, but situations will occur, i worry about my ability to write this so in advance my apologies if cringes occur.) There will be a heavy theme about the necessity of it though as the story unfolds. (Progenitor being the clue there) But any other specific theme tags i cannot really specify at this time. (i am trying to build on my general concept of the story/world/characters, and have a lot i want to write for now at least) But how to cope as a goblin in such a world is a lot of whats its gonna be about! Hope you will continue to enjoy it! do let me know of any of your thoughts!
