Review Detail of Hjbz in Rebirth to a Military Marriage: Good Morning Chief

I have this story in my library. At first I was excited to read this and when I did, I can only say that my expectations were too high. Tha world background is very vague. The story is not progressive as much as it should have, and there are always problems at every turn. it's like it's redundant in it's bullying, family problems, and etc. I hope that the novel will be improved. There were also a lot of grammatical errors as well as how the story was narrated. Can be confusing. Anyway, it may only be my opinion.